This is the draft of the flyers for our DJ3CG. Comments are welcome and amendments will be done where necessary.
Fellowship has its privileges
Don’t live life without it
DJ3 Cell Group now recruiting!
Application is invited from people from all walks of life.
Positions vacant: C.E.O (Christ’s Executives and Officers)
Number of vacancies: Unlimited
Requirements:
1. No paper qualification needed (we already had enough old newspaper, toilet paper, tissue paper etc)
2. You must be single, married, widowed or divorced. If you do not belong to any of these groups, you are not welcome.
3. Must be unemployed, employed, having own business or retired.
4. Must be a habitant of the planet earth.
5. Must have craving for food (at least wanting to eat, babies are exempted) because food is a must during our fellowship
Our track records:
1. We are well diversified. Our members consist of singles, married couples and senior citizens. You will never feel out of place whatever age group you are in.
2. We have fellowship connection as far as Australia. So if you are in distress when you are in Australia, call our DJ3 embassy. Help is always available.
3. We are food lovers and we have great cook and great eaters as well. You are welcome to indulge yourself.
No terms and conditions apply. And membership is free for life.
WE DARE TO BEAR, YOU SHARE WE CARE
The flyers will be in A4 size and I will try to put in nice fonts and make it looks attractive. This is just the contents of the flyers.
Posted by Lam Seng
we already had enough old newspaper, toilet paper, tissue paper etc)
my dear lam seng
thank you so much 4 yr effort in putting this together. if u dun mind, these r my comments: i feel the following shd be left out simply because our leaflet shd be sweet and short.
these shd be taken out:
..If you do not belong to any of these groups, you are not welcome.
..4. Must be a habitant of the planet earth.
at least wanting to eat, babies are exempted) because food is a must during our fellowship
..You will never feel out of place whatever age group you are in
..We have fellowship connection as far as Australia. So if you are in distress when you are in Australia, call our DJ3 embassy. Help is always available (this is dangerous. any tom dick and harry will look for our aussie friends as free migration consultants and we cannot commit this on their behalf.)
..3. We are food lovers and we have great cook and great eaters as well. You are welcome to indulge yourself.
..WE DARE TO BEAR, YOU SHARE WE CARE (i feel this line not so appropriate, as in meaning not so clear. anyway, it’s too long, too much info in one line and sounds a bit hard.
(as for this line, maybe u can add in …consists of toddlers, young children, old children, singles……)
Our members consist of singles, married couples and senior citizens
and so sorry dear, i still use yr email cos i dun no lah. ejane no time teach me and its late and i tired d. try to learn soon, ok?
if i have time, i will try to help out in flyer, but v busy now. 2mrw my father in law coming lah.
but u got plenty of good ideas, but try to keep it sweet and short. basically i lose interest if a flyer is too wordy…. hope u dun mind, eh?
again i say thanks to u.
angie
Dear Angie,
Thanks for your comments. The reason I put all the long sentences in is because I want to have a “teasing feeling” or sense of humor in the flyers. Otherwise the flyers is just another one of those flyers and never stand out among all the other flyers. It may look long but if put in A4 size paper with proper design it may look just fine, hopefully so
I put in these lines for a reason:
If you do not belong to any of these groups, you are not welcome – definitely everyone falls into one of these groups. This sentence is to highlight the point otherwise just to list down the group looks a little bit dull.
Must be a habitant of the planet earth – just to tease the readers.
We are food lovers and we have great cook and great eaters as well. You are welcome to indulge yourself.
and (at least wanting to eat, babies are exempted) because food is a must during our fellowship
- not that we are greedy but to it gives a comical feel into the flyers.
You will never feel out of place whatever age group you are in- to highlight to readers that there is no excuse for them not to join.
we already had enough old newspaper, toilet paper, tissue paper etc – to make readers laugh when they read this line
I agree with you on the Australia embassy thing. I will take it out. Meant to be a joke but I think you have a point there.
As for the line Dare to bear , you share we care. I also feel that it can be better. Any suggestions?
Feedback are welcome from all DJ3 members. PLEASE COMMENT and we will amend the flyers to make it looks interesting.
Angie, you can continue to use my email address. Otherwise you wont be able to see the “AN” avatar (logo) next to your comment. I uploaded it especially for you.
Dearest lam seng,
not that yrs is no good, ok,but below is just my suggestion. it needs to be improved on too. i understand yr jokes v well, but it can be stating the obvious. no offense pls. and u no what? don’t live without it sounds so much better rather than dun live life without it. what say u”
all other members pls do leave yr suggestions, comments, ideas, etc!! anyway, here’s my contribution. wish can make it better, but really rushing d. here goes:
FELLOWSHIP HAS ITS PRIVILEGES! DON’T LIVE WITHOUT IT!
FREE life membership! Join Now!
DJ3 Cell Group now open for membership. Join us for the loving, caring and sharing!
About us:
· We are a well diversified group. Our members consist of toddlers, small children, big children, singles, married couples and senior citizens.
· We are a fun loving, caring group with a passion for food for the soul and …… just food.
· We meet every Friday evening in a member’s home.
About you:
· If you wish to enjoy the above privileges, you will JOIN US today!
· JOIN US today … and you will say ‘Thank God it’s Friday!’ every Friday!
How To Join:
Fill in the form below and submit to the church office, or simply call:
Xxxxxxxxx xxx: Tel No:
Name:
Address:
Male/female:
Age:
Marital status:
I purposely use “Don’t live life without it” to make it sound like American Express tag line “Don’t leave home without it”, since we are using its tag line “Membership has its privileges”
Your version and mine are of different point of view. Mine is with the pun intended targeting the younger and not so old and a little bit “crazy” prospects. More like looking at it from the advertisement point of view. Crazy advertisements attract better.
Would like to hear from the rest. Please contribute your version or amendment of any of our two versions presented. We don’t have much time left.
Another crazy idea. Here it goes.
When there is something strange in your neighborhood….
And you if you feel that you need to……
Fit into a community
Have fun and laughter
Have passion for food
Have warm fellowship
Chit Chat
Share and care
A lift in your walk with the Lord
Overcome your shyness
Love and be loved
To go somewhere every Friday night
Who you gonna call?
Ghostbuster?
No! Call DJ3CG.
Membership has its privileges. Don’t live life without it.
Membership is free for life. No terms and conditions apply.
Who is with me for this crazy ideas? Sometimes I can be quite out of my mind
dearest lamseng
me thinks me prefer u out of yr mind. yr ghostbuster idea is much better, more creative and interesting. good job!
now we hope the silent majority will SPEAK UP for once!
as for yr card, sounds ok, only we now need the artist. can that fella pls hands up?
sigh! maybe samuel can do the job?
angie
Halo, lui lui woman again. I also like the ghostbuster idea. Agree with angie that it shd be short and sweet and catchy. i also feel that it shd be in half A4 paper (A4 paper itself a bit too big n need to put lots of points). Pls let us hv more of yr crazy ideas!!!
As for badge, seems like a good idea but think alot of people will be using heart design. Wondering if we could come up with sthg unique, different. Will put some tot into it n let u know again. Thks again 4 all yr contribution.
LAM SENG,
Thank you for your passionate input on the flyer and badge. Keep up the good job! I will go with your flow.
Best regards,
THOMAS NG